Tuesday, 17 July 2012

Discrimination


                  Discrimination is a sociological term referring to the treatment taken toward or againsta person of a certain group in consideration based solely on class or category.Discrimination is the actual behavior towards another group. It involves excluding or restricting members of one group from opportunities that are available to other groups.Discriminatory behaviors take many forms, but they all involve some form of exclusion or rejection.


                  Though gender discrimination and sexism refers to beliefs and attitudes in relation to the gender of a person, such beliefs and attitudes are of a social nature and do not,normally, carry any legal consequences.Sex discrimination, on the other hand, may have legal consequences. Discrimination based on sex is defined as adverse action against another person, that would not have occurred had the person been of another sex. This is considered a form of prejudiceand is illegal in certain enumerated circumstances in most countries. Sexual discrimination can arise in different contexts. For instance an employee may be discriminated against by being asked discriminatory questions during a job interview, or because an employer did not hire, promote or wrongfully terminated an employee based on his or her gender, or employers pay unequally based on gender. 


                   Age discrimination is discrimination on the grounds of age. Although theoretically the word can refer to the discrimination against any age group. Age discrimination usually comes in one of three forms: discrimination against youth,discrimination against those 40 years old or older, and discrimination against elderly people. In many countries, companies more or less openly refuse to hire people above a certain age despite the increasing life spans and average age of the population. The reasons for this range from vague feelings younger people are more "dynamic" and create a positive image for the company, to more concrete concerns about regulations granting older employees higher salaries or other benefits without these expenses being fully justified by an older employees' greater experience.


                   Racial discrimination differentiates between individuals on the basis of real and perceived racial differences, and has been official government policy in several countries, such as South African and the USA.
In theUnited States, racial profiling of minorities by law enforcement officials has been called racial discrimination. As early as 1865, the Civil Rights Act provided a remedy for intentional race discrimination in employment by private employers and state and local public employers. The Civil Rights Act of 1871 applies to public employment or employment involving state action prohibiting deprivation of rights secured by the federal constitution or federal laws through action under color of law.


                   In retrospect, Discrimination is a serious issue that is unfortunately rampant across the globe. It can occur anywhere, on the road or even in office. Hence, gender equality, and the fight for it, is still very important today. It will help to level unequal playing fields. It will not only down in history as a revolution that caused old systems to fall, and new, stronger ones to rise, it will also display the full capacity of the human spirit, with both men and women, spanning the various races, jobs and social standing, joining in the biggest human rights movement of all time.



9 comments:

  1. Task for the day:
    1. Go to each partner's essay on discrimination
    2. Read the essay thoroughly
    3. Answer "Which sentence/sentences did you think was/were the strongest and why?"
    "It will not only down in history as a revolution that caused old systems to fall, and new, stronger ones to rise, it will also display the full capacity of the human spirit, with both men and women, spanning the various races, jobs and social standing, joining in the biggest human rights movement of all time."
    Because it is a strong conclusion and I feel that the conclusion of every essay is the most important part for readers.

    4. Identify 2 words that need to be stronger.
    Think of a word to replace the weak words if possible.
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    5. What exactly do you like about that piece of writing?
    Matured writing. Easy to understand.

    6. Are there any parts of the essay which seems to drag?
    No.

    7. Are there any places where you lose interest or drift off?
    Yes,the paragraph on racial discrimination which only states acts and what not..

    8. Give suggestions how the essay could be made better.
    Use more real-life examples..

    :) Hi Adam! I have read you r essay! :P haha..

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  2. Good job, Carmen. Now see if you can spot mistakes and help Adam correct them.

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  4. some of the sentences are too complex and winding, so its hard for readers to understand what is the message you're trying to get across - Yi Lin

    and also i think teacher wanted us to write in depth on the topic 'discrimination' itself, not just on sex and racism. kay? :) - Yi Lin

    You have to be strong in the ways of writing this essay, how about the racism in Malaysia? What about that huh.

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  5. Discrimination is a sociological term referring to the treatment taken toward or against a person of a certain group in consideration based solely on class or category.[spacing]

    Though gender discrimination and sexism refers to beliefs and attitudes in relation to the gender of a person, such beliefs and attitudes are of a social nature and do not normally carry any legal consequences. [commas]

    Discrimination based on sex is defined as AN adverse action against another person that would not have occurred had the person been of THE SAME sex.

    This is considered a form of prejudice and is illegal in certain enumerated circumstances in most countries. [spacing]

    For instance, an employee may be discriminated against by being asked discriminatory questions during a job interview, or because an employer did not hire, promote or wrongfully terminated an employee based on his or her gender, or employers pay unequally based on gender. [Too many 'or's, you should split the sentence; terminated an employee? What? You killed him? :P]

    Age discrimination is THE discrimination on the grounds of age.

    Although theoretically the word can refer to the discrimination against any age group, it usually comes in one of three forms: discrimination against youth,discrimination against those 40 years old or older and discrimination against elderly people. [After "although", please continue your sentence and not put a full stop, I couldn't understand your sentence at first]

    This is because most employers feel that younger people are more "dynamic" and create a more positive image for the company. Other than that, employers also have concerns on granting younger employees higher salaries or other benefits without these expenses being fully justified towards older employees' greater experience. [sentence, please be more clear! ==]

    Racial discrimination differentiates between individuals on the basis of real and perceived racial differences, and has become the government policy in several countries, such as South African and the USA. [sentence]

    FIX YOUR ESSAY. >.< HAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA.

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  6. ' NICE ' ESSAY!Didyou do it yourself? Goodjob.

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  7. how do you know about The Civil Rights Act of '1871'?!

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    1. Did some googling before writing the essay =D

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